I was hanging on for dear life as the words sucked the air out of me... Until the very end I was in suspense. Hooked like a fish, then released back to reality. Well done!
Heck yeah that's a good ending. Good one, Scott. I learned a few things, which I'll never use because I tried diving and discovered it ain't for me. But . . . good story, thanks!
I was hanging on for dear life as the words sucked the air out of me... Until the very end I was in suspense. Hooked like a fish, then released back to reality. Well done!
Thank you!✌️
You basically said what I wanted to say.
Euu! So he's hauling up a surprise. Love the cliffhanger.
Thanks!
It's a bit Earnest Hemingway - for that I do not care for it. But you have captured me otherwise.
I can see that. I was shooting more for Lovecraft (who’s also not a great guy). I appreciate you reading and the feedback!
What a welcome catharsis after the election! TYSM.
Thanks for the kind comment and you're welcome!!
Heck yeah that's a good ending. Good one, Scott. I learned a few things, which I'll never use because I tried diving and discovered it ain't for me. But . . . good story, thanks!
Thanks, Robbie! You and me both.
Wow spooky. Another reason why I don't care to go into the water. Great story.
Thanks! I grew up near the ocean and I still don't much care to go in it.
Yeah I live near the ocean and also don't care to go in it.
Love the influence of Lovecraft in this :)
Thanks!!
Now this is my kind of horror, intense and brings you into the struggle! Can't wait to read more.
More fiction every Friday. And I have a podcast.
Wow, that was intense Scott. It drew me in and left me reeling in the aftermath. What was that thing, was it real. Good job at creating suspense.
Thabk you so much, Mary!
Excellent read!
Wow, you held my attention all the way. Good story!
Thanks! You should see what I can do with 2,000 words. ;-)
Guess I’ll find out. :)
That was a crisp Lazer beam of horror. Good one.
Oh, I like that! Thanks!
Good one.
Thanks!
Thabk you Patrick! I enjoy writing Lovecraftian stuff.